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Perhaps also distill and summarize some of the stuff discussed in the comments there, but try to keep it short and to-the-point. Can't quite place my finger on it, the information in your articles is usually excellent and powerful, but somehow they don't "read" as smooth or punchy as I think they could.
Probably something to do with your introduction paragraphs, perhaps read some "writing tips" articles on it. For instance, this one, the intro paragraph is directed at people that like retweets, want to save them and should RT this article. However, if I'm gonna RT this article (which I did btw) the people it's meant for are people not entirely familiar with RTs yet, but the "How to RT" part only starts halfway the article by which time these people are gone (cause the article starts out by telling them they should save something they dont know much about, yet). I'd switch that around, the RT-savvy audience will scan past a beginner-level "How to RT" and ledge on to the Call-to-Action later on because they support the cause. While the "beginners" are gonna need a sweet introduction to even convince them they should be learning something new.
Sorry for the critique, it's meant to be constructive. Cause I love your blog, especially your latest articles about Contagiousness and the one about Rumours. Good stuff. I linked them for you in the O:MF section of the PD forum, they liked it a lot :)
Getting rid of RT'ing altogether is an over-reaction and just not very smart problem solving.